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Showing posts with label critique. Show all posts
Showing posts with label critique. Show all posts

Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Thank You to My Fellow Artists for Your Comments

I was here yesterday

After some touching up this morning

   I so much appreciate everyone's critiques [though I don't think they were "brutal" enough] I have made some small changes that I think have improved her look. As for the background for the large portrait, I think I will do something soft and smoky, in blues and greys. Thank you all again for your help; it's always difficult to see what is wrong when you are working on something.

Tuesday, March 22, 2011

I'm Back ... I Hope!

   I have had a BAD month, ending up in emergency twice within a week. I had a very miserable flu that would not leave me alone. And then yesterday. I thought I would do something constructive, and clean the eaves troughs. I was almost done, when the ladder decided to lose its grip, and I rode it in slow motion to the ground. Basically, I was all right, just shaken up, but I did need twenty stitches in my right shin. Ah, well ... never a dull moment.
 Needless to say, I had NOT felt like painting. I just started today, after not doing any art for a month. I am starting a large commission for some friends, of a yellow lab. But I am doing the smart thing, and starting with at least one color study before I tackle the full size. Below are photos of Carmella, and the small study I did today. I would very much appreciate some brutally honest criticism.