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I so much appreciate everyone's critiques [though I don't think they were "brutal" enough] I have made some small changes that I think have improved her look. As for the background for the large portrait, I think I will do something soft and smoky, in blues and greys. Thank you all again for your help; it's always difficult to see what is wrong when you are working on something.
One more further suggestion.
ReplyDeleteLook at the original photo and squint - see how much light and dark you can see. I think you'll find the light under the tongue and the pinkish gum are still too light.
Something to bear in mind when you do the large version.
Coming along beautifully, Kathryn.
ReplyDeleteYES! The shadows did the trick...glorious! Hugs
ReplyDeleteHi, the shadows on his face really did give it shape and form, your eyes have lots of life in them. I think that black area under his tongue needs some lifting just to break it up a bit. There seems to be something there when you look at the photo.
ReplyDeleteI hope your leg is feeling better, 20 stitches is not something to be taken lightly.Take care and enjoy your painting.
Hi Kathryn, thanks for visiting and commenting on my blog this morning. I do appreciate it . Your dog portrait is coming along nicely...you have truly captured his expression with your beautiful washes. Happy painting !
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